Thursday, April 8, 2010

Magpie #9 Lipschtick


tonights firmament
de rigour
support and kindles
gentle closeness
soft firmness
slippery folds of skin
cleaving heaving
thrusted lips up to kiss
the sky
languishingly smooth
limpid pools
of well-worn desire
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23 comments:

  1. chiccorealApril 8, 2010 at 6:39 PM

    YOU CAN WRITE A MAGPIE TALE TOO!! GO TO: http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2010/04/wow-it-was-fun-to-see-all-participants.html

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  2. KatherineApril 9, 2010 at 4:22 AM

    Oh My! That was sensually saucy!

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  3. Jan of Thousand AcresApril 9, 2010 at 9:51 AM

    Oh so hot, very enchanting, full of wonderful imagery. Bravo!

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  4. Kat MortensenApril 9, 2010 at 10:00 AM

    Love that last line!

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  5. joannaApril 9, 2010 at 5:02 PM

    I left a comment but it did not get posted?
    Will try again - Love this poem -- sensual, sexy, provocative -- the words flow like liquid gold and spun like honey especially like the " languishingly smooth limpid pools
    of well-worn desire"
    You can almost taste the smoldering kiss.
    Joanny

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  6. chiccorealApril 9, 2010 at 8:01 PM

    Thank-you for your comments! You inspire me Great Muses/Poets/Writers!MUPOWRI (a take on NaPoMo (National Poetry Month)...a poem a day keeps the dolldrums away! what's another word for a writer or artist's dry spell? Heck!

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  7. Diana (Diane) MariaApril 10, 2010 at 2:19 PM

    Great piece!
    Wow!

    Thanks for visiting my blog and commenting. I like your work here and I'll be back soon.

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  8. JenniferApril 10, 2010 at 3:45 PM

    I love all the layers of images and feeling - especially this bit:

    cleaving heaving
    thrusted lips up to kiss
    the sky

    Well done.

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  9. CatalystApril 10, 2010 at 8:09 PM

    Yummy!

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  10. Stella JonesApril 10, 2010 at 10:03 PM

    A lovely twist of desire. Well done.
    Star

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  11. Tumblewords:April 10, 2010 at 11:42 PM

    Intriguing words - nice read!

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  12. LisaApril 11, 2010 at 1:30 PM

    my, my, (*fans herself rather quickly), I do believe I have the vapors...that was sensual and devine

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  13. Tess KincaidApril 11, 2010 at 4:32 PM

    Deliciously erotic!

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  14. relApril 11, 2010 at 4:58 PM

    chiccoreal,
    the best poetry comes from the heart of the writer who is telling the world their true and inner feelings. I think you are in here.
    rel

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  15. PattiKenApril 11, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    Woo, a hot one. I love "limpid pools of well-worn desire." That's a great line.

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  16. Brian MillerApril 12, 2010 at 8:48 AM

    whew. hot and steam magpie....i like it!

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  17. spacedlawApril 12, 2010 at 10:20 AM

    Hot, hot, hot.
    Chocolate hot.
    Cuddle hot.
    Hot.

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  18. steviewrenApril 12, 2010 at 4:35 PM

    There's lots of heat going on up in here! mmmmmmm!

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  19. Peter GouldingApril 13, 2010 at 2:53 AM

    Needs to be read slowly and breathlessly, each carefully chosen word enunciated in a half-whisper...

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  20. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 13, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/because-she-is-plain-magpie-tale/

    I wrote my first one,
    thank you for the feedback!

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  21. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 13, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    hot,
    it is nice for the day!
    beautiful poem!

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  22. UnknownApril 13, 2010 at 10:44 AM

    Very sensual; read slowly outloud as Peter suggests it's even better

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  23. The BugApril 13, 2010 at 6:33 PM

    This poem make me think of Pamela Anderson – all that sultry poutiness, that seems just a bit tawdry for some reason (I think the “well-worn” line makes me think that).

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