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Oh My! That was sensually saucy!
Oh so hot, very enchanting, full of wonderful imagery. Bravo!
Love that last line!
I left a comment but it did not get posted? Will try again - Love this poem -- sensual, sexy, provocative -- the words flow like liquid gold and spun like honey especially like the " languishingly smooth limpid poolsof well-worn desire"You can almost taste the smoldering kiss.Joanny
Thank-you for your comments! You inspire me Great Muses/Poets/Writers!MUPOWRI (a take on NaPoMo (National Poetry Month)...a poem a day keeps the dolldrums away! what's another word for a writer or artist's dry spell? Heck!
Great piece! Wow!Thanks for visiting my blog and commenting. I like your work here and I'll be back soon.
I love all the layers of images and feeling - especially this bit:cleaving heavingthrusted lips up to kissthe sky Well done.
A lovely twist of desire. Well done.Star
Intriguing words - nice read!
my, my, (*fans herself rather quickly), I do believe I have the vapors...that was sensual and devine
chiccoreal,the best poetry comes from the heart of the writer who is telling the world their true and inner feelings. I think you are in here.rel
Woo, a hot one. I love "limpid pools of well-worn desire." That's a great line.
whew. hot and steam magpie....i like it!
Hot, hot, hot.Chocolate hot.Cuddle hot.Hot.
There's lots of heat going on up in here! mmmmmmm!
Needs to be read slowly and breathlessly, each carefully chosen word enunciated in a half-whisper...
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/because-she-is-plain-magpie-tale/I wrote my first one,thank you for the feedback!
hot,it is nice for the day!beautiful poem!
Very sensual; read slowly outloud as Peter suggests it's even better
This poem make me think of Pamela Anderson – all that sultry poutiness, that seems just a bit tawdry for some reason (I think the “well-worn” line makes me think that).