tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post453954529016283298..comments2023-12-15T19:25:59.438-05:00Comments on logb: Magpie #9 Lipschtickchiccorealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-88336708846311661742010-04-13T18:33:16.235-04:002010-04-13T18:33:16.235-04:00This poem make me think of Pamela Anderson – all t...This poem make me think of Pamela Anderson – all that sultry poutiness, that seems just a bit tawdry for some reason (I think the “well-worn” line makes me think that).The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-42524960980244384862010-04-13T10:44:33.778-04:002010-04-13T10:44:33.778-04:00Very sensual; read slowly outloud as Peter sugges...Very sensual; read slowly outloud as Peter suggests it's even betterAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09093078029028920810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-8319503146339274972010-04-13T10:07:51.023-04:002010-04-13T10:07:51.023-04:00http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/becau...http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/because-she-is-plain-magpie-tale/<br /><br />I wrote my first one,<br />thank you for the feedback!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-72804125193703628832010-04-13T10:07:51.024-04:002010-04-13T10:07:51.024-04:00hot,
it is nice for the day!
beautiful poem!hot,<br />it is nice for the day!<br />beautiful poem!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-2465428021012734072010-04-13T02:53:47.617-04:002010-04-13T02:53:47.617-04:00Needs to be read slowly and breathlessly, each car...Needs to be read slowly and breathlessly, each carefully chosen word enunciated in a half-whisper...Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-45852692720774323742010-04-12T16:35:57.948-04:002010-04-12T16:35:57.948-04:00There's lots of heat going on up in here! mmmm...There's lots of heat going on up in here! mmmmmmm!steviewrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14233066158555762167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-12268393219861729202010-04-12T10:20:22.229-04:002010-04-12T10:20:22.229-04:00Hot, hot, hot.
Chocolate hot.
Cuddle hot.
Hot.Hot, hot, hot.<br />Chocolate hot.<br />Cuddle hot.<br />Hot.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-23454331611465655972010-04-12T08:48:04.875-04:002010-04-12T08:48:04.875-04:00whew. hot and steam magpie....i like it!whew. hot and steam magpie....i like it!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-9063624106566915722010-04-11T21:08:40.506-04:002010-04-11T21:08:40.506-04:00Woo, a hot one. I love "limpid pools of well-...Woo, a hot one. I love "limpid pools of well-worn desire." That's a great line.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-73268243230853757472010-04-11T16:58:40.661-04:002010-04-11T16:58:40.661-04:00chiccoreal,
the best poetry comes from the heart o...chiccoreal,<br />the best poetry comes from the heart of the writer who is telling the world their true and inner feelings. I think you are in here.<br />relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-37660215577339462272010-04-11T16:32:26.496-04:002010-04-11T16:32:26.496-04:00Deliciously erotic!Deliciously erotic!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-57257917312503776322010-04-11T13:30:50.479-04:002010-04-11T13:30:50.479-04:00my, my, (*fans herself rather quickly), I do belie...my, my, (*fans herself rather quickly), I do believe I have the vapors...that was sensual and devineLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05440632162084471888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-64078144668346198452010-04-10T23:42:13.118-04:002010-04-10T23:42:13.118-04:00Intriguing words - nice read!Intriguing words - nice read!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-82344478065853991572010-04-10T22:03:03.890-04:002010-04-10T22:03:03.890-04:00A lovely twist of desire. Well done.
StarA lovely twist of desire. Well done.<br />StarStella Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06699491230987143490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-42935099808564059272010-04-10T20:09:59.395-04:002010-04-10T20:09:59.395-04:00Yummy!Yummy!Catalysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03804837416104556928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-24539127657003563402010-04-10T15:45:25.171-04:002010-04-10T15:45:25.171-04:00I love all the layers of images and feeling - espe...I love all the layers of images and feeling - especially this bit:<br /><br />cleaving heaving<br />thrusted lips up to kiss<br />the sky <br /><br />Well done.Jenniferhttp://www.jensrealia.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-76542200446337526662010-04-10T14:19:42.666-04:002010-04-10T14:19:42.666-04:00Great piece!
Wow!
Thanks for visiting my blog an...Great piece! <br />Wow!<br /><br />Thanks for visiting my blog and commenting. I like your work here and I'll be back soon.Diana (Diane) Mariahttp://dianemaria.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-86498187678584476362010-04-09T20:01:14.664-04:002010-04-09T20:01:14.664-04:00Thank-you for your comments! You inspire me Great ...Thank-you for your comments! You inspire me Great Muses/Poets/Writers!MUPOWRI (a take on NaPoMo (National Poetry Month)...a poem a day keeps the dolldrums away! what's another word for a writer or artist's dry spell? Heck!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-55328598581719566152010-04-09T17:02:35.653-04:002010-04-09T17:02:35.653-04:00I left a comment but it did not get posted?
Will...I left a comment but it did not get posted? <br />Will try again - Love this poem -- sensual, sexy, provocative -- the words flow like liquid gold and spun like honey especially like the " languishingly smooth limpid pools<br />of well-worn desire"<br />You can almost taste the smoldering kiss.<br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-64100578961079847612010-04-09T10:00:36.391-04:002010-04-09T10:00:36.391-04:00Love that last line!Love that last line!Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-22831648231796329642010-04-09T09:51:54.859-04:002010-04-09T09:51:54.859-04:00Oh so hot, very enchanting, full of wonderful imag...Oh so hot, very enchanting, full of wonderful imagery. Bravo!Jan of Thousand Acreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06465791173754714407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-33396343165684661442010-04-09T04:22:34.627-04:002010-04-09T04:22:34.627-04:00Oh My! That was sensually saucy!Oh My! That was sensually saucy!Katherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667997972741557676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-1890089513023401112010-04-08T18:39:06.952-04:002010-04-08T18:39:06.952-04:00YOU CAN WRITE A MAGPIE TALE TOO!! GO TO: http://ma...YOU CAN WRITE A MAGPIE TALE TOO!! GO TO: http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2010/04/wow-it-was-fun-to-see-all-participants.htmlchiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.com