The structure of a cinquain is rather amazing. I love your peacock verse. Now I have to try this! I'll have to try one! Did I get it correct? Did I make a cinquain? (crossing fingers here!)
Jack Pine
Silent Sentinel
freezing stretching bending
Algonquin Coniferous
A Resplendent tree most fine
jj
Cinquain...try one! go to; (to find out how to write a cinquain)
http://marinelareka.com/?p=2034&cpage=1#comment-1496
Jack Pine
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freezing stretching bending
Algonquin Coniferous
Lonely Tree
not sure if there can be compound phrase of one meaning two words. It should be one. I got too complicated, again! Two pronouns which make up one descriptive word makes this more complicated. Hmmmmm. Since the name is Jack Pine not just Pine. Hmmmm....
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freezing stretching bending
Algonquin Coniferous
Pine
(settled THAT!)