Friday, July 2, 2010

~~Magpie#21~~~FIREWORKS!!!~~~1-4 JULY 2010



FIREWORKS!!!

THE DUSK OF TWILIGHT RELENTS
UNREPENTANT
SYNAPSES EXPECTANT
THE DEEPENING DARKNESS
THE NIGHTSKY PUPILS
ENCOMPASS OUR INKYNESS
SURROUNDS THE CROWDS
LIKE A BLANKET HUG
SENSES ON ANTICIPATE
THEN
THE FIRST CRACK OF KABOOM
AND LIGHTENING AWAKENING
THE SOUL SOUND
AUTOMATED
WE LOOK UP
EXCLAIMING OUR "OHH'S" AND "AHH'S"
IN CHORAL SYNCHRONIZATION
THE LIGHT SHOW CRESCENDOS
EXPLOSIVE COHESIVENESS
UNBOUND FROM EARTH
UNLEASED FROM HEAVEN
UNKNOWN POWERS OF LATENT DESIRES
POINTS OF BRIGHT LIGHTS
COLOURFUL SPECTRUM
INTERFACE
INTERACT
INVOLVE US
EXPERIENCERS
REMINDERS
FORMATIONS OF MEMORY
PRIMORDIAL STONE SOUP
IGNITE THE FLINT
SULPHURED AIR
AGES PAST ROCKS
OF THE BLISS
OF THE BIG BANG
REMAINING
SOMEHOW
WITHIN
US ALL

HAPPY CANADA DAY 1 JULY!!! USA HAPPY 4th OF JULY!!!

jj

14 comments:

  1. You have managed, in one Magpie, to capture everything wonderful about fireworks and their magical properties!

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  2. So many vibrant words so well blended to make us feel the moment.

    "SENSES ON ANTICIPATE
    THEN
    THE FIRST CRACK OF KABOOM"

    I remember this vividly as a child. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. Well done and I love the wonderful music --Happy Fourth....blessings..bkm

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  4. "sulphured air" I love that you brought my olfactory senses right in and hooked me. Those two words alone brought me outside your poem and into my own reminiscence of youth gone by. Greta job!

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  5. vivid images written into a wonderful magpie!

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  6. Oooh... Ahhh !! I can see, hear & smell the fireworks! This is a wonderful magpie

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  7. great Magpie-especially liked "blanket hug"

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  8. great description of the magic of two very important holidays!

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  9. fireworks are so magical...and you show that in the picture you paint for us. nice magpie!

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  10. THE BLISS
    OF THE BIG BANG
    REMAINING
    SOMEHOW
    WITHIN
    US ALL

    Perfect finale to a perfect poem!

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  11. Your poem really gripped all my senses! You did a great job pulling the reader in, I felt hooked! Oh, and I love fireworks:)

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  12. Your poem sparkles, crackles, and pops! Thanks for sharing!

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  13. The intensity of your words portray the thrill which comes with each firey explosion. We read the prose of gunpowder everyday in the news and only at times of celebration do we witness it's poetry.
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