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I think the last line would sound better "Our sweet dreams, these, we set free..." Whatdya think?
For I have struggled all my lifeI seen so much torment and strifeBut realized I was going the wrong wayEnlightened Now I did not staySo I went the other way as I makeI am Now in the center of reality as I am Awakeenjoy my Dearest chiccoreal(+)Dom* ;) xoxoxo---[--@
Beautiful Thank-you for your wonderful poem Dom! Being "in the center of reality as I am Awake" is so very important! It all plays out in the "now" which is the "be" I believe!