Wednesday, November 17, 2010

~~~Magpie 41~~~"Imposing"


Imposing

The sun set on our designs
While Eternity stages
other event horizons

jj

9 comments:

  1. http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2010/11/mag-41.html
    Find the words to free the verse within to set your mind in motion!

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  2. I tried my hand at a haiku, also, but this is better.

    This is nice.

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  3. nice haiku..."Eternity stage, other event horizons.." thaank you...bkm

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  4. Nice piece... haiku perfect for the stages..

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  5. Oh, this is perfect - it stretches forward!!

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  6. Oh, that Eternity. Always imposing. ;^)

    (beautiful)

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  7. simply fantastic.
    powerful imagery.

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  8. http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-nature-plants-creatures.html

    Dear poet, welcome join Jingle Poetry Monday Potluck… old poems, or poems unrelated to our theme are all welcome.…
    We value your contribution and cherish your talent!
    Hope to see you soon,
    xxx

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