Sunday, October 2, 2011

Magpie #85 The Rainbow Land Leviathan




The Rainbow Land Leviathan
Save us oh Leviathan
drink the flood waters
that was wrought to the rotten
Save us oh Leviathan
divide the swirling earth
as hell rises awaiting
Save us oh Leviathan
engorge on water
hold back our tears one more year
jj
Please join us on this elephantine adventure this week! Thank-you Tess Kincaid of Magpie Tales for this week's humongous prompt!
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12 comments:

  1. Tess KincaidOctober 2, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    Nice write Chicco...I especially like "wrought to the rotten"...

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  2. Jackie JordanOctober 2, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    Enjoyable read ...

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  3. Doctor FTSEOctober 3, 2011 at 8:30 AM

    Can even your Leviathan save us? Hope so.

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  4. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryOctober 3, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    neat.

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  5. HelenOctober 3, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    Your Magpie is humongous!!!!

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  6. Brian MillerOctober 3, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    if only leviathan could...smiles...nice unique play on the prompt!

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  7. MaggieOctober 3, 2011 at 3:14 PM

    Yeah, one more year.

    P.S. Love the tree.

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  8. christopherOctober 3, 2011 at 10:15 PM

    Can love fly?
    Sometimes.
    I tried to drink all the spirits.
    Does that count?

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  9. Dave KingOctober 4, 2011 at 6:25 AM

    Love it - as I do the rest of the blog. Excellent.

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  10. TrellissimoOctober 5, 2011 at 4:31 AM

    That last line is a poser...

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  11. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 8:45 AM

    Thank-you for the comments; most appreciated as always and I try to get back to each one of you on your blog (if you have one or two or three..:) Trellissimo: I certainly hope and pray that "poser" is the definition of not being "a poser". Thank-goodness there are at least two definitions for everything! Phew!Chiccoreal The Poser! (may get more clicks this way!)

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  12. Isabel DoyleOctober 6, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    leviathan indeed!

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