Friday, January 7, 2011

Magpie#47~~~Mother Cell Soul Haiku Test



(i)
Tense rubber band hands
hold us near your heart
Mother love is endlessness

(ii)
Bending stretching light
holding tightly for dear life
This Soul Lesson One
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5 comments:

  1. KassJanuary 7, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    Oh yes, you made me see it.

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  2. HelenJanuary 7, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    Your haikus are wonderful ... SO is your music. I'm just going to sit here and do a little listening!

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  3. HelenJanuary 7, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    Cab Calloway, Bill Haley, Peggy Sue, Glen Campbell, Sade, Neil Young, Blues Brothers .... OMG I am in heaven!

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  4. MaggieJanuary 9, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    These are wonderful haikus. It is something I strive to do better.

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  5. Tess KincaidJanuary 10, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Rubber band hands is brilliant. Well done, Chicco.

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