tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post857657643979926883..comments2023-12-15T19:25:59.438-05:00Comments on logb: Alf and Bet: Alf Bet's Are Off (52 Bradbury Ode Road Series: A short story a week)chiccorealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-86711798464629876812009-06-10T17:30:45.166-04:002009-06-10T17:30:45.166-04:00Michele Jones at 12:59pm June 10
oh sweet mama...I...Michele Jones at 12:59pm June 10<br />oh sweet mama...I enjoyed your story immensely!!! I laughed, I cried, it was better than Cats!!! (The musical) This story is very candescent of a certain bet and alf i know..weird...<br />There is a great use of juxtaposition..example...bet felt tired when she was in the bedroom, but found rest in doing the dishes...<br /><br />I love your ability to write about a really depressing situation, but yet still find humour in life's idiosyncrasies!!! I nearly peed myself when bet felt her soul had been all trodden over with clown shoes!!! Its very sad that she feels so heartbroken, yes, but the use of clown shoes really is a testament to your use of humour as bet's coping mechanism.<br />... Read More... Read More<br />i have much more to say, but i will tell you the next time we talk....I also think you really should look into writing comedies.....you would do really well!!!<br /><br />MISS YOU!!!! Ja-Len Jones at 5:28pm June 10<br />hey miche! thanks! MISS YOU TOO...READ YOUR PM ...I LOVE THE INPUT THANKS!LIKE THE CLOWN SHOES EH? HAHA!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.com