tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post4889327969946779364..comments2023-12-15T19:25:59.438-05:00Comments on logb: On The Confusing Poetry Bus: NIAMH!!!Where The Frigde Is It Now?chiccorealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-78189563045463442842010-07-27T08:54:01.845-04:002010-07-27T08:54:01.845-04:00Lordy, Chiccoreal! What a poem! Your last few line...Lordy, Chiccoreal! What a poem! Your last few lines are perfect. Thanks for your part of the tour.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-7678559699547905812010-07-26T23:16:38.979-04:002010-07-26T23:16:38.979-04:00Yet again another great tumbling ball of energy th...Yet again another great tumbling ball of energy that threatens to go over the top but is just held in check. Like a stream of consciousness that ends up a great waterfall of seething images.Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-62008147918100398402010-07-26T13:24:11.353-04:002010-07-26T13:24:11.353-04:00@Titus Trying to bus the envelope rather than the ...@Titus Trying to bus the envelope rather than the bus! Thank-you for liking those stinking lil' old odd lines of my crow footed mug! I am trying to be as irreverant as I can be without doing time. I guess? I cant believe how much ppl like this! Guess the rant style goes good with bangers and mash, or Guiness!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-77767155946015148302010-07-26T13:20:51.006-04:002010-07-26T13:20:51.006-04:00@watercats Thanks! Trying to do the groove thing a...@watercats Thanks! Trying to do the groove thing and yah, a little owing to Jack Kerouack and others Beat poets!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-14778276799702223872010-07-26T13:17:23.274-04:002010-07-26T13:17:23.274-04:00Dear Totalfeckineejit: Yes I have monopoly on Mad ...Dear Totalfeckineejit: Yes I have monopoly on Mad Lately! My fav mag too! TRying to branch out of my usual pay-per channel psychosis! On the buses!Is the mostest!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-8618018810235687412010-07-26T13:14:01.229-04:002010-07-26T13:14:01.229-04:00@Helen; isnt the word "knitwits" kind of...@Helen; isnt the word "knitwits" kind of odd? I think anyone who "knits" is a genius, the patterns so intricate! Nonetheless I used it for some reason during my rant! Oh that's what it is now!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-37878755232835858052010-07-26T13:12:12.148-04:002010-07-26T13:12:12.148-04:00@Niamh B: the image of wet feet comes up in my wor...@Niamh B: the image of wet feet comes up in my work a lot and i notice, lately same with E.Dickinson, so I have to wonder if there is something to sychroonisity or just everybody gets wet-footed from time to time. You know the icy cold kind where they freeze? I live in Canada so it gets cold feet a lot here!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-91937937248225381422010-07-26T13:09:43.230-04:002010-07-26T13:09:43.230-04:00@Argent this really confused me; i try to be "...@Argent this really confused me; i try to be "edgy" on the bus and then I find I already am by nature, so the smoothy is just an act!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-84597275868559939592010-07-25T18:40:41.330-04:002010-07-25T18:40:41.330-04:00Yeah, a ride is right. The sound carried me, the ...Yeah, a ride is right. The sound carried me, the meanings smothered me and I loved lots, but this stanza particularly;<br />Confusion one more wretched step in writhing pain<br />stewing too long in endless traffic back again lane<br />with wretched look "no compute" his ought naught fate <br />philosophy doesn't work here much, me sorry mate<br /><br />I'd also love to hear it!Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-13820939249300347852010-07-25T09:01:42.570-04:002010-07-25T09:01:42.570-04:00what a ride!... and an incredibly beatnik one at t...what a ride!... and an incredibly beatnik one at that! too many cool bits to pick out, but I'm in total agreement with eejit there, a particularly nice bit of imagery :-DBatteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-10067240872015828112010-07-24T18:56:56.207-04:002010-07-24T18:56:56.207-04:00A profusion of confusion.Many nuggets of one-liner...A profusion of confusion.Many nuggets of one-liner gold in that tumbling maelstrom of words.<br />And that 3 mouthed face is giving me the heebeegeebees! <br /><br />'Confusion reportedly transgressed the street<br />swirlin' trapeze artists on dope<br />seeming skunked by sink designers<br />Insych plays with the new old timers'<br /><br />Mad, but like in a really good way!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-11636478925289344302010-07-24T14:51:44.085-04:002010-07-24T14:51:44.085-04:00Confusion is what nitwits do well ~~~ so true! Sa...Confusion is what nitwits do well ~~~ so true! Sade music made your confusing piece even better!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-11524446664169378022010-07-23T09:35:21.873-04:002010-07-23T09:35:21.873-04:00Yes, you definitely have an amazing amount of ener...Yes, you definitely have an amazing amount of energy Chicco!!<br />I like the big laugh evening out the score, "wet stocking feet dragging bout cold as hell" is one of my favourite bits for the music of it, great journey.Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-69217167527684931202010-07-23T08:35:45.406-04:002010-07-23T08:35:45.406-04:00Yowzah! That was a real tumble of images and word...Yowzah! That was a real tumble of images and words! Such energy, though! "Lording it over as King o' the Cookie Crap Pile" my favorite line.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.com