tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post1968393773673764592..comments2023-12-15T19:25:59.438-05:00Comments on logb: ~~~Magpie#28~~~The Day of Sol-i-Mi-Oh~~~Dedicated To The Sparkling and Glowing Willow!!!chiccorealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-84826459628606492902010-08-25T14:36:51.035-04:002010-08-25T14:36:51.035-04:00I had begun to worry about you, with your painstak...I had begun to worry about you, with your painstaking clinical disections of other poets work, so I came back to say I worry no more after this sensuous rumble and tunble in the bath! <br />And thanks for the 'smoking' comment. <br />The purveyors of addiction and misery have not gone away, just moved to Asia.Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-39587629035480572742010-08-22T22:27:11.431-04:002010-08-22T22:27:11.431-04:00Woohoo! These get better and better and better! Th...Woohoo! These get better and better and better! Threes...I know.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-92172703297532038512010-08-22T13:53:15.279-04:002010-08-22T13:53:15.279-04:00My heavens! Someone's going to need a cold sho...My heavens! Someone's going to need a cold shower...Vicki Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08114677510459055768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-3767499019476048122010-08-21T02:19:20.555-04:002010-08-21T02:19:20.555-04:00Great Hot and sexy read....Indeed Sensuous...bkmGreat Hot and sexy read....Indeed Sensuous...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-88004269249110802562010-08-21T02:18:20.246-04:002010-08-21T02:18:20.246-04:00Very sexy ...great take on the prompt...great Hot ...Very sexy ...great take on the prompt...great Hot reading here...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-24538292658500744462010-08-20T12:18:24.123-04:002010-08-20T12:18:24.123-04:00Aie chihuaja (or however it is spelled)
What a hot...Aie chihuaja (or however it is spelled)<br />What a hot flaming bath....woweeKathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-68668873066425524622010-08-20T05:43:46.276-04:002010-08-20T05:43:46.276-04:00I had to go and chop down a tree! Hard thing for a...I had to go and chop down a tree! Hard thing for a Greenie! (If you don't recognise the reference ask a pre sexual revolution boy scout)! hot hot hot!Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-2827272297211222622010-08-19T23:28:14.939-04:002010-08-19T23:28:14.939-04:00Wow! So sensuous, full of heat, wonderfully descr...Wow! So sensuous, full of heat, wonderfully descriptive...Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-55475219123239419242010-08-19T23:23:05.242-04:002010-08-19T23:23:05.242-04:00vivid descriptions,
a lovely tale!vivid descriptions,<br />a lovely tale!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-22085757904869160672010-08-19T21:01:13.399-04:002010-08-19T21:01:13.399-04:00Oh wow! This is HOT!Oh wow! This is HOT!Angie Muresanhttp://www.angiemuresan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-87716385416996589942010-08-19T20:20:01.463-04:002010-08-19T20:20:01.463-04:00Version 3
She languished in resplendent luxury
He...Version 3<br /><br />She languished in resplendent luxury<br />Her bath her ardent desire; her passion <br />as heart covered foamy jets of suds awash<br />Her Greek god poured forth such sweet nectar<br /><br />She Glistened with moist ambient energies<br />her radiance shone like stars through the cosmos <br />little drops of dew kissed her innocent forehead<br />flying sparks ignited those ancient desires <br /><br />Her langour inclined and propped now <br />His presence felt as her feet mounted upon the tiled wall<br />to receive his waiting gift of aloes and hyssop<br />as cupid had drawn the bath; he drew her closer<br /><br />She knew no other craving like this <br />His magic power of intent melded her resolve <br />every hollow in her being overflowed with heaven's opening <br />This secret chamber of bath and beyond all earthly bliss <br /><br />Upon her porcelain pedimont like an unguent, this oil<br />His words drawn upon her soul<br />This vessel full of Love<br />Sweet surrender to Cupid's knowing poutchiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-31936006608170077342010-08-19T19:58:37.906-04:002010-08-19T19:58:37.906-04:00used forehead too much cause I've been "b...used forehead too much cause I've been "bangin'" mine (in a good way!). i THINK the forehead in the last stanza could be "her porcelain feet". Oh THAT'S better!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-53702200089849728302010-08-19T19:44:15.668-04:002010-08-19T19:44:15.668-04:00Dear Folks: Abit of polish always makes the ritual...Dear Folks: Abit of polish always makes the ritual complete! Here is a redo of the above Ode to Willow done upright this time!(I have been sketchy lately; having to fly here and there at a moment's beck and call from the back balcony..."Coming Romeo! Hold on to your horses already! The hub must learn to wait at least a minute, geesh!"<br /><br /><br /><br />She languished in resplendent luxury<br />Her bath her ardent desire; her passion <br />as heart covered foamy jets of suds awash<br />Her Greek god poured forth such sweet nectar<br /><br />She Glistened with moist ambient energies<br />her radiance shone like stars through the cosmos <br />little drops of dew kissed her innocent forehead<br />flying sparks ignited those ancient desires <br /><br />Her langour inclined and propped now <br />His presence felt as her feet mounted upon the tiled wall<br />to receive his waiting gift of aloes and hyssop<br />as cupid had drawn the bath; he drew her closer<br /><br />She knew no other craving like this <br />His magic power of intent melded her resolve <br />every hollow in her being overflowed with heaven's opening <br />This secret chamber of bath and beyond all earthly bliss <br /><br />Upon her tender forehead like an unguent oil<br />His words drawn upon her soul<br />This vessel full of Love<br />She surrendered to Cupid's knowing pout<br /><br />jj (You like this version abit better?)Yes/No? Ty Ty Ty LOVE YAS!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-73301054702879615222010-08-19T19:40:41.012-04:002010-08-19T19:40:41.012-04:00As Willow said - this is a fabulous read. Thank yo...As Willow said - this is a fabulous read. Thank you.Marilyn & Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00851884880790561276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-21812130787945300732010-08-19T15:13:41.925-04:002010-08-19T15:13:41.925-04:00This is so absolutely baroque-ishly beautiful! Di...This is so absolutely baroque-ishly beautiful! Did you perhaps forget to sign in over at Maggie? This one is too fabulous not to be read!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-14781152213741634812010-08-19T14:14:03.868-04:002010-08-19T14:14:03.868-04:00sounds like wonderful splendor...a bath usually ta...sounds like wonderful splendor...a bath usually takes me aways from it all but...smiles. nice magpie!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3078811688087039278.post-10747641700303129982010-08-19T13:41:13.521-04:002010-08-19T13:41:13.521-04:00Obviously a steamy bath...Obviously a steamy bath...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com